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GED GED-Writing - GED Essay Writing Exam

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Total 300 questions

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Sentence 1Wishing to thank you for the opportunity to discuss our common problems.

The most effective revision of sentence 12 would begin with which group of words?

A.

Wishing and thanking and giving

B.

I thank you for wishing

C.

I wish to thank you for

D.

Our common problems are a wish

E.

The opportunity to wish

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Sentence 9:Elena has always been a conscientious employee who represented our company in the best possible manner.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

employee who represented our company

B.

employee who, represented our company

C.

employee who represented our company,

D.

employee, who, represented our company

E.

employee, who represented, our company

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Sentence 6:It will change the quality of life in Medford with the proposed shopping mall.

A.

it will change

B.

will change

C.

had changed

D.

the quality

E.

life in Medford

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Which sentence would be most effective if inserted at the beginning of paragraph D?

A.

Food is a problem, and there are more problems

B.

Be quiet, and don’t talk so loud.

C.

Finally, we need to discuss phone etiquette in the workstation

D.

There are many other problems that we need to discuss

E.

Think about safety issues, health issues, and general etiquette at the office

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Sentence We will be hosting the next workshop on thursday, October 15.

Which correction should be made to sentence 5?

A.

remove will

B.

change hosting to host

C.

change thursday to Thursday

D.

insert a comma after October

E.

no correction is necessary

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Sentence As you know, Montgomery is home to many artists and who volunteer their time to work at the Galena Arts Academy with the children as a part of the city-wide Volunteer Artists’ Program.

Which correction should be made to sentence 2?

A.

remove the comma after know

B.

remove and after artists

C.

replace who with which

D.

insert a comma after children

E.

replace a part with apart

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Sentence These books and brochures contain valuable tips take you through the steps of successful job searching.

The most effective revision of sentence 5 would include which group of words?

A.

brochures will contain

B.

tips that will take

C.

you to the steps

D.

through the stepping

E.

searching for a successful job

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Sentence 8:I plan to visit Los Angeles in mid-December, I would hope to arrange an interview with you during that time.

Which is the best way to rewrite the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

mid-December, I would hope

B.

mid-December, and I would hope

C.

mid-December, but I am hoping

D.

mid-December and having to hope

E.

mid-December I would hope

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Sentence Also, we would make the space available for community events.

Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 4?

A.

remove sentence 4

B.

move sentence 4 to follow sentence 2

C.

move sentence 4 to the end of paragraph A

D.

move sentence 4 to the beginning of paragraph B

E.

no revision is necessary

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Sentence Impressed was I, when Elena first came to Ryan Industries, with her ability to learn the job quickly.

If you were to rewrite sentence 5 beginning with

When Elena first came to Ryan Industries,

A.

impressed was I

B.

quickly learning with her

C.

she impressed me

D.

impressive ability and I learned

E.

I quickly impressed